Evaluation and effects of the application of control lists/findings in school written production
Keywords:
Textual production, interactive evaluation, list of findings, Rewrite.Abstract
According to documents such as the National Curricular Parameters/PCN (BRASIL, 1998) and the Curricular Guidelines of Basic Education of the State of Paraná/DCE (PARANÁ, 2008), the Portuguese Language discipline has the function of contributing to the expansion of the communicative capacity of students, enabling them to communicate adequately in the various situations of social interaction in which they are inserted. The DCE advise that the teaching/learning of Portuguese language should improve the linguistic and discursive knowledge of the students, so that they understand the discourses that surround them and be able to interact with these discourses. For this, it is essential that we consider the social nature of language, as well as the context of the production of utterances, which have their meanings socially and historically constituted. In the dialogical perspective of language, when working with the writing and rewriting of texts, as a Portuguese language teacher of public school and as a researcher, We were interested in investigating, in our master's research (in progress), linked to the Stricto Sensu Graduate Program in Letters, Professional Master's Level in Letters/PROFLETRAS the elaboration and application of a pedagogical resource that could assist us in the evaluation/correction of written textual production, and that would enable students a more effective means of reviewing their texts, with a view to guiding adaptations in the rewriting process. For this, we first elaborate a resource model, the list of controls/findings, and developed a series of activities aimed at its use to produce texts written in the classroom, during and after which we tested it. Situated in the field of Applied Linguistics Studies, characterizing as action research, in the discussion of this work we approach the effects of the application of this resource in the evaluation, review and rewriting of texts of students of a 7th year of elementary school, from a school of the state public school of a municipality of the West of Paraná, highlighting the changes observed between the first and second version of the text, as well as the ability of students to relate the items listed in the lists with what is contained in their texts. During the research, we observed that the interactive evaluation, performed via the list of control/findings proved to be an effective resource for the practice of rewriting, because it contributed to the awareness of the students regarding the aspects that can change their texts. The interactive evaluation/correction contributed to the expansion of the necessary conditions for students to write texts more appropriate to their project of saying.Downloads
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